Thin Clouds and Cigarette Smoke

Moon, thin cloud and smoke

It was all over so soon, Jazz:
front men becoming side-men then
sidling to the back as electricity and
loud voices drowned them out.

So the Jazz player leans against the
back door of the thumping club, the
mood lost, staring at the Moon, thin clouds
and cigarette smoke.

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  • Chris La Tray  On November 7, 2014 at 3:30 pm

    This is great. Especially that second stanza.

    • fridayam  On November 7, 2014 at 7:47 pm

      Thank you 🙂 I am glad you enjoyed and I hope you will read more.

  • stillight  On November 9, 2014 at 8:11 pm

    I liked this. I especially liked the ending.

    • fridayam  On November 9, 2014 at 9:30 pm

      The ending came from the fact that I forgot the flash was on, on my phone as I tried to take a photo of the Moon 😉 Hence my cigarette smoke being so lit up 😉 Thank you 🙂 x

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