Spring in Autumn

It could be a Spring day, with the

flowers on their third or

fourth burst, blossom on the

hawthorn that thinks its

missed Winter, the tic-tic of

robins protecting their

second brood: but the days

shorten not lengthen, and I

hope the chicks grow fast and aren’t,

as we so often are,

caught out by Winter.

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  • stillight  On September 27, 2014 at 4:40 am

    Nice! I especially liked the line ‘but the days shorten not lengthen’.

    • fridayam  On September 27, 2014 at 7:37 pm

      Funnily enough, a line I agonised about 😉 Should it be the other way round? Thank you

    • fridayam  On September 27, 2014 at 9:20 pm

      Btw, thank you that you liked so many of my other poems 🙂 If you want to communicate more freely, my email is fridayam@hotmail.com x

      • stillight  On September 28, 2014 at 4:59 pm

        I liked quite a few of them actually, especially ‘Amen’. Lovely. However, I am not very good at giving constructive criticism, or even attempting to try and explain why it is I like something. I guess you could say I just like what I like. “) Poetry is a mystery to me.

      • fridayam  On September 28, 2014 at 7:27 pm

        All poetry is a mystery, that is what makes it wonderful and life-affirming. Emily said “Tell the truth, but tell it slant”. Like everything she ever wrote you could take that a thousand ways, but nevertheless it is one of the most important things ever said by a poet to other poets.

        And thank you for the kind words 🙂 x

      • stillight  On September 29, 2014 at 4:31 am

        Thanks for explaining – I had forgotten that line – a good one. and true; great advice to poets.

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