“Ask Me Now” (Thelonious Monk)

Ask me now while I’m

full of you and your

heart beats against my breasts and my

legs enwrap you and your

sweat mingles with mine and your

balls tighten to inject me and every

hormone in my body is

screaming “Ask her now” and

I’ll say yes and yes and yes so please

ask me now.

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  • davidwallacefleming  On November 8, 2011 at 11:10 pm

    I have to give some credit here. This is a good poem. Good use of enjambment. Good assonance in the second line: “full of you and your”

    And this technique brings to mind something I hadn’t thought of before in poetry, which is to use enjambment and assonance together. It’s a subtle effect. Good work.

  • Leah  On November 11, 2011 at 2:05 pm

    and I’d say yes too

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